One of the factors that play a critical role in learning is gaining insights on whether one is making progress or not. This can be achieved through reflecting on different aspects and processes of learning including feedback and comments from tutors and fellow students. In my case, the review and comments that I received on my first assignment have been critical in helping me improve my writing skills and as such, improve the quality of my second writing assignment. For instance, in my first assignment, I thought that using quotes in the introductory paragraph will help enhance the credibility of my essay.
在学习中起关键作用的因素之一是了解自己是否在进步。这可以通过反思学习的不同方面和过程来实现，包括导师和同学的反馈和评论。就我而言，我在次作业中收到的评论和评论对于帮助我提高写作技能，从而提高第二次写作作业的质量至关重要。例如，在我的份作业中，我认为在导言段落中引用引语将有助于提高我论文的可信度。然而，通过我导师的反馈，我意识到如果我需要在介绍部分使用任何参考资料，我需要对其进行解释。除此之外，导师的评论还提出了一个问题，那就是我如何介绍我的论点，并在整篇文章中支持它们。这一评论为我提供了一个机会，让我能够学习如何在我的文章中发展我的论点。我想我已经有了很大的进步，这反映在我的第二篇文章中，我把每个论点都分配到了自己的段落中。
However, through feedback from my tutor, I realised that if I needed to use any reference in my introduction section, I need to paraphrase it. Apart from this, the tutor’s comments raised a concern on how I introduce my arguments and sustain them throughout the essay. This comment created an opportunity for me to seek to learn how to develop my arguments in my essay. I think I have improved significantly and this is reflected in my second essay whereby I assigned each argument to its own paragraph.
Apart from the tutor’s comments, I also used Grammarly and Turnitin to evaluate my grammar and determine plagiarism level in my work. Note that through use of Grammarly, I noticed that I faced a challenge with tense in my sentences. For example, I had mixed past and present tense, thus making my work difficult to read. However, the use of Grammarly helped me correct these and other grammar mistakes, and as such, I think I have improved significantly as far as grammar is concerned. In addition to Grammarly, I also used Turnitin. I think this tool is critical for every writer since it helps in identifying areas whereas one has plagiarised other people’s work. Therefore, through its use, I managed to reduce the percentage rate of plagiarism in my work, thus improving its quality and credibility.
除了导师的评论外，我还使用语法学和Turnitin来评估我的语法，并确定我工作中的剽窃水平。注意，通过使用语法，我注意到我的句子中的时态面临挑战。例如，我把过去时态和现在时态混在一起，因此我的作品很难阅读。然而，语法的使用帮助我纠正了这些和其他语法错误，因此，我认为我在语法方面有了显著的进步。除了语法，我还使用了Turnitin。我认为这个工具对每一位作家来说都是至关重要的，因为它有助于识别剽窃他人作品的领域。因此，通过它的使用，我设法降低了我作品中剽窃的百分比，从而提高了作品的质量和可信度。